Sunday 7 June 2015

Anzac Poppy
Fragile red
like blooms of rubies ,
petals dripping with blood, clear air,
blowing on a delicate jewel,
like the last glowing star.


By Carys

See if you can find personification comment what you find thats personification in my poem.



2 comments:

  1. your writing is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!


    here is the personifacation clear air,
    blowing on a delicate jewel




    how did you think of all of that?

    ReplyDelete
  2. your writing is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!


    here is the personifacation clear air,
    blowing on a delicate jewel




    how did you think of all of that?

    ReplyDelete